Woke up and started writing.

I know I'm onto something when I wake up and just start writing. 

Since I decided to break Tuskers III into three different books, I've been feeling inspired.

I've created a couple of new characters, and I believe the spinning out of their storylines will make the book a book. 

Linda really likes both new characters.  It's funny, I think I've found a talent for that -- creating characters with a few strokes, making them at least somewhat believable. For me, that's what becomes a plot.  I have an overall scenario, I create a few characters to inhabit that scenario and let them play out.   They are recognizably a 'type' but that's what makes it easy to create full fleshed characters faster.  Hopefully, they have individuality too.

The advice that is always given is to write, write, write.

For me, I'm sort of finding my strengths and weakness by writing. 

They aren't what I thought they were.

I thought I wanted to write fantasy, but I find I like writing in real world locations much more.  I'm still very strongly genre, however.  I find realistic drama to be incredibly boring.  I want the hook, the exotic, the interesting ideas.

I think my strengths are story and characters and a weird bent of mind. I'm relatively facile with words, and I could actually probably be more "artful" but I've decided purposely not to do that.  The story is everything.

Dialogue is a challenge, but I try to handle that by making it as simple as possible.  No Tarantino monologues for me.  No Sorkin-ish cleverness.  I try to make it serviceable, at least. I try to use a little subtle humor

Finding the right blend of description and yet a fast forward plot is always a challenge.  I'm still trying to learn how to do that.

I'm just trying to pursue what comes naturally, what feel right, and the more I do that, the more I find a groove.  I wasn't sure if my 'groove' was something that people would like, but I feel like the more in groove I feel, the more positive reaction I get.  So I'm just going to keep doing that.

I've been writing full time for about 2 1/2 years now, out of an original 5 year plan.  I've extended that plan for another 5 years.  I'm hoping I can keep improving.

Thunderbold solution.

Yes, I misspelled thunderbolt.  A newly coined word.  :)

As I've been saying, Tuskers III is split into 3 parts.  The whole book works, though the first two parts are somewhat disconnected.  Part 3 ties parts 1 and 2 together nicely, though.  

I like the thematic structure of the novel this way.  It is getting bigger in scope, and complexity, but I figure anyone who has already read Tuskers I and Tuskers II will be up to it.

As it is currently, the book would be about 80K words, at least 1/3rd larger than the first two books.  Again, not what I would prefer but if it takes that many words to wrap up the storyline, so be it.

Anyway, in thinking about it this morning, it occurred to me is that what I've really got on my hands are three different books, not three parts.  I have the other chapters already simmering in my head.  I'd love to flesh it out a little, expand the characters a little, add a few more action scenes, that kind of thing.

Part 1 could turn into a book by simply continuing the logical progression of events, which I was going to need to summarize in Part 3.  Easily done, plus part one has a great climax that is more than satisfying enough to be the climax of a total book.

Part II is already pretty much its own story, and is mostly written.  Again, it has a pretty satisfying climax.

Part III is just a story in my head so far, but I really like the whole idea of it, so I know it would work.

If it were just me, I would definitely turn these into 3 books.  I went ahead and proposed the idea to my publishers.  I'm afraid they'll think it is a money grab, getting more advances, but really, that isn't it.  I think the whole story will be more satisfying this way.

I think if Tuskers goes to five books, each of them probably ought to have their own title, though.  Sometimes like Day of the Long Pork: Tuskers II.

I hope they like the idea.  It's very energizing.

Perception is not the reality.

Because we're in a relatively small comic market, we've had to be somewhat presumptuous in how we handle sign-ups for comics. More often than not, we will assume that certain subscribers will like certain titles and automatically sign them up for it.  Especially for DC and Marvel.

We try not to overdo it.  We try to make sure that the titles are compatible.

The thing you have to understand is, we buy comics non-returnable.  Hundreds of titles that we are more or less guessing on every month.

If it was games or toys or books or even graphic novels, either we have it or we don't.  We can buy what we need when we need it.  But being periodicals, we have to keep buying comic titles, whether we need them or not, whether they sell well or not.  Because, we just don't know.

But we've learned that if we wait for people to actually tell us they want a title, it is usually too late to do anything about it.  Or...they never ask.

So that is the system we've had for years, now.  Making the decision for the reader, very often.

And it seems to work.  There is a constant turnover in books and the interest in books, and this seems to help keep things level.  Most everyone seems all right with us doing that.  (They have the option of not taking a title they didn't specifically ask for -- but I'd say they take them about 90% of the time.)

Coming up in April and May, and continuing after, both DC and Marvel are throwing their universes into complete change-over mode.  So for about 3 months, we won't have any idea based on previous selling history, how these completely new titles will do.

If we were doing it the way most comic shops do it -- that is, waiting for people to sign up -- this would be a huge problem.  But because we're going to more or less make the decision for the customer, we may not get hurt too badly.  We hope.

So, for instance, there is a title called Shadow of the Bat.  If we just assume all Batman subscribers will want that (after we explain the regular Batman won't be coming) we can hope that 80 or 90% of the customers will accept that explanation and buy the comic.  We hope.

Something I've learned over the years -- customers will complain about constant turnover, but they will often respond.  Whereas, if the market remains stable (as they say they want) they will slowly drift away.  In other words, the comic publishers are simply responding to what the customers actually do, versus what customers think they're going to do.

This is true more often than not.  The perception is not the reality.  You have to deal with the reality, not the perception.

 

Tis and tat.

Got a jury summons for April.  I've gotten out of jury duty a couple of times in my life for the very legitimate reasons that at the time I was a one man store operation.

This time, I can't make that excuse.  I'm not sure a touch of agoraphobia is enough of a reason to be let off. 

I guess, if I truly see myself as a responsible citizen, I'll have to follow through this time.  Dammit.

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Rock musicians from my era or even slightly after seem to be dropping like flies --- especially drummers, heh.

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Going to see the Kingsmen today.

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Worked at the store yesterday. Making massive orders -- hopefully Spring Break will pay off, if not, summer is coming.  The period between Christmas and mid-April is always dreadfully slow, so it's hard to both keep the inventory up and not fall behind.  I've stretched the not ordering for about as long as I can stand it.

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Navigating the subconscious current.

As I mentioned yesterday, I wasn't happy with the last chapter I wrote.  I decided I would rewrite it from scratch, without reference to previous writing.  Good thing, too.  Because the previous chapter disappeared from my computer.

When that happens, I wonder if I had some sort of brain burp, where I had intended to cut and paste and instead forgot. Or what?  It is somewhat alarming when you lose an entire chapter -- it can ruin your whole day if you let it.

I very self-consciously decided not to get upset and to go ahead and write a new chapter.  Which worked out fine.  It was a better written chapter, which matched the flow of the book much better.

Best of all, at the end of the chapter I had two crux points covered by one event, when originally I thought I'd have to have two separate chapters to get to the two crux points.  There was a certain synchronicity to this discovery -- the subconscious at work again.

It remains an ongoing question to me how writing occurs -- how much is conscious and how much is subconscious and what the blend of the two is.

It seems to me to be like navigating a river.  The momentum comes from the flow of the current.  Whether you survive the trip comes from conscious navigating.

Meanwhile, on both Tuesday and Wednesday I had to make quick trips to the store to deal with banking issues.  On Tuesday I went early, and finished by 2:00.  This should have given me six hours to write, but instead, my mood was completely off and I didn't do much.  Meanwhile on Wednesday, I decided to wait until after 4:00 and get the writing in early.  That worked.

If I get my "blood-roiling", which is what I call being exposed to the outside world, then it is much harder to settle into the subtle rhythms of writing.  At the same time, I'm completely convinced that I need to have my blood roiled on a regular basis so I don't turn too much into the weird recluse writer that is my natural inclination.  Working at the store helps, but I'm not getting enough of that.  Helping Linda at her store is both necessary for her and helpful to me.  And then there is the walking in the wilderness, which I love. 

Facebook just seems to show me what a recluse I really am.  Thing is, I'm only bothered by it when I think about it...

This writing thing has turned into a routine.

Went to Pegasus Books for some chores yesterday, then sorted books at the Bookmark for a few hours. By the time I came home, I just didn't feel like writing.

Partly, I'm not liking the chapter of Tuskers III I'm writing right now.  I need to get back to my previous idea of writing from scratch.  I made the mistake of trying to use previously written material.

I know that the chapter before this, I wasn't all that happy either, but when I read it to Linda that night, it was fine.  Much better than I expected.

Anyway, I'm determined to finish the problem chapter today.  It's important to write, to finish, to do the work.

I work at the store tomorrow.  I'm hoping to come back next week and completely finish part one of the book, and also write the unfinished chapter of part two.  Then I can concentrate on part three.

Just nuts and bolts stuff.

I signed a contract for Tuskers II and III yesterday.  Ragnarok also asked what else I might have to offer them, which is encouraging to say the least. 

I really want to see The Last Fedora in print, if possible.  (It's off with Lara, and I'm curious to know what she thinks of it.)  And I'm hoping I can get Faerylander to a place where I think it's worthy.  (It's off with Bren, and I told her to be as hard on it as she thought she needed to be.)

Not sure about the Audible Tuskers.  Audible seemed to think I wanted to narrate my own book, but hell no. I want a pro to do it.  I'm as curious as anyone to see how it sounds.  So my publisher had to clarify that.  I'm hoping soon.

This writing thing has turned into something a little more routine, I think. 

Making progress.

It isn't coming easy, but it's coming.

Tuskers III is more a crafted book than one of those books that just come spilling out. That doesn't mean it isn't as good.  There is something to be said for craftmanship, rather than inspiration.  Things tend to be slightly better thought out.

They're just more work.  The writing isn't quite as smooth the first time, usually I have to spend a fair amount of time rewriting, and rearranging.  But as long as I'm making progress, as long as I'm putting the pieces together, it's fine.

I've mentioned before, I'm hoping after I've done all the necessary work on Faerylander and the other two Lander books, and finish Tuskers III, that I can then stick to books that come easy. The magical books, where the story just appears in my head and writes itself.

I'm not saying they're better or worse, but they take half as long to get there, and are more pleasant to write.

The thing I don't know is -- will these ideas come in a timely manner?  Tuskers came over me.  Then The Last Fedora came over me.  But I don't know if I can depend on that happening, and if it doesn't, then I'll need to write something nevertheless.   A planned and plotted book, most likely set in one of the existing worlds.  Nothing wrong with that, I'd just prefer the "magical" books, if possible, you know? 

Can  you blame me?

Dreaming solutions.

Sometimes I dream solutions, but most often an answer pops into my head just as I'm falling asleep or just as I'm waking up.

If I have any doubts about my writing, these little helpful hints tell me my subconscious is still engaged and still willing.

As I've been mentioning, I have a timeline problem with the beginning of the third Tuskers book.  The Tuskers set off a massive electromagnetic pulse which fries every machine in the world.  I was looking for ways to level the playing field, to make it at least moderately possible that wild pigs could be a threat to humanity.  So this Pulse, along with the virus the humans set loose upon both humans and pigs at the end of the second book, instigate the downfall of human civilization.

The problem I was having was the timing of the Pulse.  I have it happening about 2/3rds of the way through Tuskers II.  Then, I more or less go back in time in the third book, and then back in time again.

I woke up this morning realizing that everything could be fixed if there were TWO Pulses -- the first a localized, limited, experimental, not-ready-yet Pulse which is what gives the Tuskers the advantage in the battle we see in the Tuskers II and the aftermath in III. 

And then, a much larger, worldwide Pulse.

That takes care of the timing problem.  I have to rewrite a little, but it should be achievable. 

Cool.

Like I said, there always seems to be a solution, though it isn't always easy to see at first.

Click bait truth? Entrepreneurs.

I usually don't pay much attention to click-bait type headlines about entrepreneurs.  They're almost always wrong, or talking about a whole nother level of entrepreneurship. (Apple and I don't have a whole lot in common.)

But...I admit I check them out occasionally.

There was a pretty good one on Business Insider this morning, that I more or less agreed with.
 
"Psychologists say successful entrepreneurs have these 4 personality traits."

The first paragraph caught my attention, because I think it's the first time I've seen these particular statistics:

A third of all business fail in the first five years, and two thirds fail within ten years.

This seems about right.  The old bromide of "half of all business" fail in the first 2 (or 5) years has always seemed outrageously overstated to me.  At the same time, I always felt that in a longer timeline, say 10 years, that it was much worse than acknowledged.

So anyway, that caught my attention.

So the four personality traits, in order.

1.) "They're generalists, rather than specialists."

I love books, I like comics, I like games, and so on.  But when people say, "Wow.  It must be great to own a bookstore!" I always answer, "No, it's great to own a business."

Most of what owning a business entails is of a more general nature than specialized knowledge in one thing.  You have to pretty much do everything, especially at first.

2.) "They're outrageously self-confident."

Well, I don't know about 'outrageously,' but yeah, you have to have a firm faith that you'll succeed in the end.

I once told my mom that I tested as the 'most self-confident' of all personality types.  She laughed, because she equated self-confidence as being able to walk into a group of people and command the room.  I've always been reserved, shy.  So she didn't see that as "self-confident."

But what really matters?  Figuring out things for yourself, doing what you want to do, and making it work?  Yeah, that.

I feel self-confidence is being able to go your own way, no matter what.  Thinking for yourself, going against the tide even if everyone else seems to disagree with you. 

3.) "They're disagreeable."

I hate to cop to this, but it's undeniable.  You have to impose your will on the world, and this takes a form that doesn't always please other people.

4.) "They're conscientious."

I'm just going to say this, even if it's disagreeable:  I have conscientiousness in spades.

So here's the thing.  No one knows how hard I worked to make Pegasus Books work.  You can get a hint with my writing.

You can see specific results with writing.  How many books I'm writing.  How dedicated I am to the process.  How I see things through.

Well, I was applying that same sort of conscientiousness to my business for years.  It isn't the kind of thing that is noticeable on a day to day basis.  The results can take years to show up.  But day in and day out, I was doing the things necessary.  Out of sight of anyone, I'd spend hours doing things tht others probably would have skipped.  (Another example is this blog -- writing everyday for 7 years.  I set my mind to doing it, and then I DO it.)

Anyway, this all probably seems a little arrogant of me.

But, you know... see the above. 

Timeline problems.

I tend to discover the plot by writing it.  When I wing it, I tend to have timeline problems that could have been avoided by a little outlining in advance.

But trying to outline usually means not writing, so I really don't have much choice.

Anyway, with Tuskers III, the beginning of the book kind of jumps around.

I want to start the book from the viewpoint of Barry, the main character of the first book and a very important character in the second book.  I want to bring in his wife, Jenny, and do a small recap of what's happened in the first two books.  This all feels right.

However the second chapter, with the Tusker Napoleon, actually takes place two or three days before.

Then I jump back to Barry, a day after the first chapter, but still a day before the events in the Tusker chapter.

Then back to Napoleon.  Now on the day of the first chapter.

I can clearly label the chapters, I suppose, though that always seems kind of lame.  Kind of like:

Two Days Before Z-Day.  -- Barry

Three Days Before Z-Day. -- Napoleon

One Day Before Z-Day. -- Barry

Two Days Before Z-Day. -- Napoleon

Or I could put them in sequential order.  Problem is, the book doesn't read right in sequential order.  It's more important that it read right than the timeline be in order, in my opinion.  I'm not sure there is any way around it.

Going to just write the book and see how it reads at the end.

Went out the Badlands again yesterday.  I have a little route I take, about a five mile walk.  I love it when I'm alone.  When it was sunny a few days ago, I ran into two other groups of people -- which makes it hard for me to concentrate.  (I also talk to myself as I'm walking, working out plot details.)  I generally spend about 4 or 5 hours out there, and I usually manage to get my word quota in.

Yesterday, it was cloudy and just the right temperature. Apparently the clouds were enough to keep people away.

I tried to plug my power cord into the laptop last night and there was just enough grit in there to keep it from connecting.  I managed to blow out enough of the grit to make it work, but barely.  Obviously, I've got to find a way to protect that. 

You can't go out into the Badlands, you can't walk off the road, and you certainly can't sit down -- without accumulating dust.  Dust is the price you pay...

Working as medicine.

I didn't miss working at the store at first.  But now that I'm going into my third year of taking so much time off, I'm really starting to notice it.  I look forward to the days I do work.

I miss talking to people -- who I consider friends, really -- at the store.  I miss the random surprising conversations.

I can tell that Matt and Cameron have developed a clientele of their own, and this is good.  It may be my imagination, but they seem younger.  It's all good, that way.

But I'm such an independent cuss that I could easily spend all my time alone, except to pop up and cuddle with my wife and cat. 

Not good for me.  Isolation breeds isolation. 

The store is doing well.  It may be about the first time in our history that we have the product lines in place, the cash-flow to keep the inventory up, and enough growth to feel comfortable.  Gee, it only took 35 years.  And who knows how long it will last?

Anyway, I have no intention of changing things.  I need the time to write, basically.  Hell, it takes me a day to get over every day I work, so it would definitely cut into my writing time if I worked more days.

But I see work as good for me.  Taking my medicine, if you will.

Throwing away 10,000 words.

I'm going to start the book from scratch, without referring the the earlier version whatsoever.  10K words, gone.

Thing is, I have no trouble writing, you know.  I mean, I can cover that ground pretty quickly now that I have a clear idea of what I'm trying to accomplish.

It's very tempting to try to adjust the previous material.  But often the tone and the information and the viewpoint and the sequence have to be changed so much that what happens is a horrible quagmire, a patchwork that takes just as long or longer to fix and usually isn't as good.

At the end, I can go through those 10K words, and if there is a sterling sentence or passage that doesn't have to be changed and which fits the new material, then OK.  I can add it.  But not until I've written a whole new framework.

The middle part of the book is mostly written, but I have to start the book over at the beginning.  The first 3 chapters are going to be in the viewpoint of Napoleon, a Tusker, which may be a dangerous thing to do -- but I figure if readers have gotten this far, they'll be willing to go along with it.


Later:  Wrote the first chapter, totally fresh.  Read it to Linda.  She liked it.

Not better or worse -- just harder to do.

Read the first 3 chapters of The Last Fedora at writer's group last night.  They seemed to like it.  Pointed out a couple of cliches:  "deep wells" for eyes, and "soothing the savage beast."

They also thought the 10 year old character was way too precocious for the age.  Easily fixed, actually.  I can make him 12, 13, or even 14.  I'm thinking 13 right now.

One of the readers hadn't heard of Golem's.  I figure anyone who tracks down a book called, The Last Fedora: The Gangster Golem Chronicles, is going to know what a Golem is.

Back to the salt mines.  Trying to get Tuskers III right.  I always know I'm in trouble when I have to fiddle with the structure of a book.  I don't know why this sometimes happens and sometimes doesn't.  It doesn't really make the book better or worse -- just harder to write.

I had another brainstorm.  Do it in 3 parts.

Z Day, Minus One.

A continuation of the characters from books I and II, with a heavy emphasis on a Tusker named Napoleon.

Z Day, Plus One.

The new characters and how some of them meet the characters from the first two books.

Z Day, Plus 523.

This is set a year and a half after the events in the first two parts.  Bringing all the characters together in one final confrontation.

Z Day Plus One is more or less written.

I have a bunch of material that originally was going to be threaded through the story, but which will have to be rewritten as a separate Z Day Minus One.

Z Day Plus 523 will have to be written pretty much from scratch.

I'm going to do something different I think.  I'm going to outline each of the first few chapters; be clear about what I'm trying to accomplish before I write them.  Don't know if this will work, but I'm going to give it a try.

It is going to be a challenge to make the first part of the book work, but that's okay.  I probably need a challenge.

But, damn.  I wish they all came as easy as The Last Fedora or the first Tuskers book!

 

I know there is an answer, I just have to find it.

Everything has been a new experience with this round of writing.

Back in my first career, (7 books) each book I wrote was a separate world.  Which is odd, since LOTR's was my inspiration.  You'd think I'd want to write a trilogy.  Snowcastles and Icetowers were really one story split in half (because I wanted two money advances instead of one...)

Anyway, when I wrote the Death of an Immortal, I hadn't been planning to write a sequel, but the story left itself open to one and enough people liked the first book and asked for a continuation that I gave it a try.

Somewhat to my surprise, the second book, Rule of Vampire, was easy.  It just naturally followed the first, without having to invent a whole new world.

Blood of Gold, the third book, though, turned out to be more difficult, for a couple of reasons.

1.) An accumulation of characters that needed to be included.  I discovered that in order to engage my interest, I needed new characters to write about.   It was O.K. to add new characters to the second book, it wasn't unwieldy.  But by the time the third book rolled around, I needed to have all the characters be part of the book, and that got a little dense, and at the same time, scattered -- if both of those things can be true.

2.) Loose ends.  There were so many incidents in the two books, and a long story arc, that needed to be resolved.  In a sense, when you write a trilogy you're upping the ante with each book, making the story bigger and wider, and all that has to be brought to a satisfying conclusion.

So while the first and second books are fairly easy, by the time you get to the third book, it becomes much more complicated.

I've come to realize that a Series is different from a Trilogy.  Or put another way -- a series can be a bunch of separate stories starring the same characters -- or they can be one long story.

I think from now on, I'm not going to attempt the long stories, if I can help it.

The Virginia Reed Adventures are each separate, with the protagonist the same and the basic format, but not a continuing story.  Same with the Lander series.

That's going to be my model from now on.  So, for instance, if I continue the Golem Gangster Chronicles, each book will be a separate adventure.  Same with the Deeptower books. (I have a fantasy trilogy in mind, but that's on the backburner for now.)

All the above is a roundabout way of saying that I'm finding it hard to write the third Tuskers book.  There are so many characters and storylines that I'm afraid they're becoming too diffuse.  I love the overall story arc, I think it works, but the mechanics of it are daunting.

I'm going to keep trying different approaches until I've got one that works.  I'm not afraid of throwing out entire chunks if I need to.  I know there is an answer, I just have to find it.

Synopsis and tagline for Tuskers II.

Tuskers II is scheduled for May. 

The cover is being done by Mike Corley again, and they wanted a tagline to match, "The Pigs Are Not All Right." (Somehow this tagline, which Andy Zeigert came up with, was perfect.)

I came up with: "Stay Out Of The Desert."

The following is the back page synopsis.  Any and all suggestions at improving it are appreciated.

"Barry and Jenny have inherited a fortune, with a single stipulation: that they hunt down and eradicate the Tuskers.  They can only hope the Tuskers are gone. They aren't sure they can follow through on the genocide of an entire new species.

Genghis, the smartest and most ruthless of the Tuskers, survives.  Deep in the desert, he breeds with the wild pig population.  These mutants learn from humans, and quickly surpass them.  

Next time, mankind won't be so lucky."

Like a whole new book.

Sending The Last Fedora to editor Lara today, and starting up the second half of Tuskers III.

After taking three days off from writing, it's feels good to have that urge again.  I'm looking forward to the writing, which is reassuring.  I wasn't sure how I'd feel, and the eagerness to write Tuskers is a good sign.

Most of the second half takes place after an as yet indeterminate time jump.  Probably a couple years, enough time for a couple generations of Tuskers.

I've got the general shape of the second half in mind, the theme I'm trying to get across, and the character motivations.

I'm thinking, rather than get bogged down, I'll just write the second half without referring much to the first half.  This may be a mistake, but I remember enough I think to pull it off.  It has the advantage of feeling like a whole new book, bringing that "new book" energy.

I'm thinking it will be good, which is a good feeling to have as I approach the end.  Endings are hard, especially when it is a three book storyline.



 

Bullshit manufactured fake conflict or drama not justified by the story or characters presented.

The latest episode of Agents of Shield was shite.  You know things have gone wrong when characters just start yelling at each other for no apparent reason and completely out of character, and or cry about something that has zero emotional resonance.

Sad.  I guess I'm in the minority over preferring the lighter, spoofier first half of the first season to this overwrought and totally unconvincing melodrama.  Just as I prefer Flash to Green Arrow. Unfortunately, it looks like Flash is following Green Arrow's formula more and more.

Gotham is hit or miss, but I'm enjoying it.  A couple of great characters in the lead and Penguin.

I never could watch Supernatural, cause that seemed to be the blueprint.  I think it's all very calculated.  Must have screaming match, must have crying session.  Never mind if the story actually warrants it.

Agent Carter was fun.  Maybe it was because the lead actress was British, but she was very convincing as a 1940's character.

I've tried to watch Green Arrow three or four times now, and...no thanks.  I don't buy any of the motivations.

Second worse kind of show:  Quirky, unconvincing characters and lame banter.

Bones, NCIS, all CSI's except the first seasons of Las Vegas, etc. etc.  Almost all network programs.

Except The Good Wife. This one is the real deal.  Real drama, really clever banter, totally believable characters acting as they would act.

We watch Castle, which is totally formulaic.  Comfort food.  Nathan Fillion has charm to spare.

Linda and I saw Jupiter Ascending yesterday.  It was flat, emotionally.  I'm betting because this story was manufactured, not felt.  You can always tell when the writer is telling a story from the heart, and when they are telling it from the head.  I liked it better than the reviews. 


Temporarily between writing books, so have time for consuming movies and TV and books.  Reading the lastest Lee Child, Michael Connelly, John Sandford, and James Lee Burke in quick succession.

I'm trying not to be too conscious of the writing, which is pretty perfunctory these days for these authors.  Just light reading.

Fluffing it up.

The Last Fedora: The Gangster Golem Chronicles is done, but I want to spend a few days fleshing it out a little.  Little bits of description where they are needed.  Just looking for small ways to enhance the story.

I may have rushed the ending slightly.  I always want to get to the end when I see it, and the ending is not the place to get bogged down.  But Linda thought it needed a little more.  I printed up a copy of the last two chapters and she said she'd look at them.

I had left a couple of main characters out of the ending, so I just wrote a couple of small scenes bringing them back.  I'm going to mull over how to enhance those last few pages.  Make them as satisfying as I can.

What is most useful is to let my editor, Lara, have a look at it, and then do a little more fiddling around when I get back her comments.  Usually that is enough to make the book work.  I'd say this book came out about 88% complete, whereas Tuskers probably came out 96% complete.  (Most of my books come out more like 60 or 70% complete with the first draft.)

I have books where I spend more time on back story and history, more character development and description -- and I have books where everything is very straightforward, where the whole point is the easy reading action.

I like both kinds of books.

When working the regular job is a vacation...

Spent the day filing books at Linda's store.  I enjoy doing that, fortunately.  It's hard to keep up with the numbers of books we take in.  We certainly don't have room for everything, even when we take out duplicates. 

It doesn't bother me to have stacks of unfiled books behind the counter, but it bothers Linda, and there is a danger that it could get out of control.

In between books.  Which is rare  I'm almost always writing one book or another.  I've got two books that are more than 30K words.  The one I obviously need to finish is Tuskers III.  I broke off in the middle because I realized the book was going to be tens of thousands of words bigger than the first two books, and I thought probably wasn't a good idea.  I was able to split off a section and put it in the second book, but that meant a bunch of rewriting.

Anyway, now the book is ready for the second half.  It will probably still be bigger than the first two books, but not outrageously so.

I want to take a little time to contemplate the ending, try to figure out ways to really punch it up.

Working at Pegasus today, which as I've mentioned before, is almost a vacation these days.

Tuskers: doing relatively well.

Relative being the operative word. In the top 1.5% of all horror novels (62K books), Ragnarok Publication's best-selling book in February, and it spent most of the month in the top 100 suspense/horror novels on Amazon.

http://www.amazon.com/Tuskers-Duncan-McGeary-ebook/dp/B00S4FGFK2/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1421039260&sr=1-1&keywords=Tuskers+duncan+mcgeary

So cool.

It isn't going make me rich, in fact, I'll probably remain in the hole for a long time, what with my laptop, covers of books, and editing buying.  Not to mention all the money I'm spending on employees by staying at home.

But still, makes me feel like a writer.

Led to the Slaughter and The Dead Spend No Gold also continue to sell at a relatively moderate pace.